Friday, January 20, 2006

wHIMs of Stars ...- 3 !

As he was playing with the kid, he heard a voice.
The ever pleasant voice. The words that chilled his mind.
"Hi Shreyas". She was tall, neatly clad in a cotton saree.
Shreyas slowly started reciprocating as he was almost lost by her changed looks.(may be towards life;-)

Her once inquisitive, blink a second, eyes have become matured n lively emitting care and enthusiasm. And a pleasant surprise which she tried to hide. He at once realised , she was slightly exultant in seeing him.

"Sorry if I had made you wait ?"
["I am still waiting"].
"No problem. It is worth the wait".
She gave a warm smile, but still her cheer in seeing him flowing outta her eyes, which she couldn't suppress.

They went for a small stroll under the shades of the innumerable trees planted, with the chirping of birds reminding shreyas the purpose of his visit as Mita explicated on her mission of life and why she kept a safe distance from the rest of the world and worked in a disconnected mode.

"why? No calls? No mails?"
"If I say I wanted to concentrate, that may not be fully true. But I really wanted to give myself absolutely"
Shreyas mumbled, "may be to bring the golden rays of ur intellect and diligence to focus"
Hours passed as they chatted under a tree. Mita went about saying, how she got the thought which gave wings to her dreams, and ultimately became a mission of her life.
Shreyas pondered "was she one in a million ? If one in a million can think like her, a thousand villages will flourish in India."

And mita shook his hand..
"Shreyas, what about u.how are things?"
"Oh yeah, I passed out of college.Am a software engineer.
The end ;-)"... n they both were laughing their hearts out !

Shreyas couldn't hide the curiosity of the kid with the same name he saw in the lobby."Oh come on, She is my neighbours daughter. They like me a lot, n so kept my name" For a moment, he thought "even I can change my name to mm..m..Mita? ;-)"

They had a lunch-on under the tree, with a typical hot villagic cuisine served in a plantain leaf.Shreyas almost gulped a jug of water and finally enjoyed the dessert called "chaka pradhaman", a keralite delight !
"How do you make this?"
"It is almost a jack fruit milk shake"
Shreyas looked up the sky and thanked god for giving him a day of freedom frm pizzas n bugers.

As shreyas was playing with the kids on the block, Mita stood there admiring him from a distance. Days went back....
...
Her ruminations of the college corridor playing again in her mind. Her admiration for him. His known crush. Her secret concealed affection. Her mission. Her detachment finally n now he is back. Is it the whims of stars ? Years have gone by. What if he just came to see me and nothing else ?
.....
...
Shreyas paused. She just came back to reality.
"Am gonna leave".
"[again :-( ?] oh ya. Hope you had a wonderful time. It was so refreshing to see you back."
n the kids again pulled him for play.

Mita closed her eyes. A few moments passed. She wished God that it could rain so that no one would see her cry ! ...

She went back to her lounge, concealed her face in her hands. There was a bunch of flowers on her table. Slowly held them in her fingers and grazed her cheeks over them.... A small card fell on the floor. A cute lad winking with a flower. As she opened.. the words read... "Will the angel take me to the heaven of love? - From loving shreyas to the ever lovable mita". The moment, all the windows of her world opened. She threw the flowers up in cheer and again wished God it could rain, so that she could dance !

It was the twilight zone. The Sun was about to bid adieu for the day and get back to its abode under the ghats. Shreyas looked at the sun set. Is it depicting his love leaving him ? or just to dawn again tomorrow ?

He packed his bags. Hugged the kids. And finally kick started his bullet. The children were waving their hands and he began his retreat after the sweet treat ;-).As he was riding, he saw a small gift neatly wrapped, placed inbetween the bike's dashboard.There was a sudden brake. He was jus not able to hide his cheer n unwrapped the gift. It was a photoframe with a pic of Mansas,mita and the kids. He kept it safely in his bag. His element of ecstasy took a heavy beating n he was about to throw the wrapper into the wind ...n he saw someting being written into it.

"Wait for me ! The angel is comin with u !" - Mm..mm..mita..

...
...His ecstasy knew no bounds ...
...
... The End ...:)

30 Glances:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Guess I'll hv to read the prev two posts to understand this one....shall be back !

4:03 AM  
Blogger Anck su Namun said...

Got you tagged !!

Check out my post :-)

4:52 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Rusty, no probs...! at ur marzi ;-)

12:58 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@Anck su Namun,

Thanx for the tag ! :) Will do it soon ...

1:00 AM  
Blogger xtremely_insane said...

yep yep.u have been tagged.
i'm following this story closely :)

6:26 AM  
Blogger che sara sara said...

hey i read it full...
it gets into my blood...flows through my viens...reaches my heart...
aweseome work man...when is the next part...waiting anxiously

6:49 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

hi @xtremely_insane,

Anck su Namun tagged me too ! :)
Will do it shortly !

Hi Sophia,

The entire write up is done !
Thanx for the comments dudette :)

8:13 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I'm out of words to comment on this one.

GREAT !.

8:33 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

hey digi...thanx dude ! :)

8:57 PM  
Blogger Queen Bee said...

Sometimes it's real hard to describe the pull and the longing a person can have for the other person, and to carry on waiting just for that person...

10:45 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Queen bee...welcome to my blog...n thanx for the comments dudette ! :)

10:50 PM  
Blogger Directhit said...

Really nice one(s) ... to love and to be loved back is ECSTASY!!

5:21 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Kewl post Ice... guess this can surely be passed around as "made in heaven" :) and unlike ur previous ones a happy ending..does this mean atlast u have got a personal love story which is gonna end in hapiness...well my imagination horse has taken wings ;)

5:56 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Anoop,

Thanx for the comments dude !

Hey Bard,

Dont let ur horse run too much da ...;-) bayama irku...:-D

6:20 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

WoW IcEyeZ: Loved the story and the end!
Its mission accomplished on both sides!
Way to go!
Is some Mita coming along? ;)
Best wishes!!

6:24 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Rashmi,

Sirph ek dream ..! ;-)

8:34 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

May your dreams come true!

9:52 PM  
Blogger Visithra said...

err what happened to reva? ava paavam no? but awww nice story

11:09 PM  
Blogger cutefreaky said...

nice story..though it is the usual love story... i guess u made it sound interesting....but then names were too modern to associate with a scene when u read them

:-)

tata
sukku

11:50 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Vishitra,

reva ??..hmm..hhaahaa...wat to do...Shreyas can marry only one ;)

1:22 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Sukhanya...
ena long time no see..
btw...names are'nt tht modern ! :)

1:23 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Hmmm nice Iceyez..liked the end!

1:55 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Cute story !
Can we have more ...please.

8:09 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

IcEyeZ: Have tagged you, waiting for your list! :)

9:05 PM  
Blogger cerisecarnations said...

i love this story..so simple yet so intense..

11:48 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Curious...
Thanks a lot..!!

Hi Moods n colors...howz u...u were on n off for quite sometime...

6:57 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@cerisecarnations...hope I conveyed what I wanted to say ;) ...thanx for passing by ! :)

6:58 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@Rashmi...will take the tag soon :)

6:59 PM  
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