Tuesday, January 03, 2006

wHIMs of Stars !

Sweet lil pain - Thts how he descirbed her in his heart !
she was suave , she was pleasant...she was this..she was tht...
"oh my !" thought Reva... this is the 57th time, shreyas is talking about his crush ... but still she was all ears for him to give him
tht boyish joy ..!

Reva had seen shreyas rite from her school days...
A typical boy next door...
Playful yet responsible...
Sweet when he talks, spicy when he parties...
neat when he sets off to work, rugged when hez home...
so much she knows...abt him !
and she was his repository of his day2day happenings and musings...

After yet another hectic day @ work, reva was jus' home n started to ease herself by relaxing.
She turned on some mild music
of an AR Rehman Classic !

For a moment she looked out of the window...Wah ! It was a Full Moon day ! She quickly reached the terrace to see shreyas..
He was seated quite calm n composed, wondering at the moon !
She silently patted him on his right shoulder and quickly
moved to his left...Shreyas looked around and gave her a warm smile...
"whats up da?"
"Dad is lookin out a gal for me"
"so?"
"nothin...was thinkin' for a moment..."
"abt?"
"I wanna see her once.Mita."
"(Oh! not for the 58th time)ya wheres she now?"
"There were no mails, no calls ever since we passed out of college.She had always told shez gonna settle in her native, tanjore, a town down south."
"good da. When are you starting ?(her voice was a bit shaky now)"
"are you ok ? bad day at office?"
"No da. Jus a small cold. I will be ok."
"Take care. I will be heading to tanjore for the weekend"

As he came upstairs, he met his dad.
"Shreyas, u have a date this weekend"
"wow, dad, u changed ur business? "
"Shut up ! This is the gal we have seen for u. Ur meeting her @ cafe mocha on saturday evening"
"gr8 ! this is what I call NGP - the "Next Gen Papa". Will u spare me for abt a week dad. I will make it next weekend"
"Is that a promise"
"I dont think so;-)"
and...after a few hrs, Shreyas kicked his bullet and headed down south !


To be continued !

23 Glances:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Icez,

Manirathnam post thodarndhu avara madhiri story aa kondupora..hmmmm!!

Liked the 'NextGen pap'...shud ask my dad to read this ;-)
Keep it comin daa....

10:43 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hey Jade,

U were absconding for a while ??!! no new posts at all...busyah ?

10:53 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ahemmm...good start and nice to read one without ur obsession for rhyming stuff ;)

My requests : Plzz dont make reva and shreyas together..it sooo boring.. at the same time dont kill any characters else when u start ur bullet i will have ur brake wires wid me..Cheers :D

11:29 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@Bard,

Adpavi...Break wire ella venaa da..!

12:08 AM  
Blogger Love you longtime! said...

Hey, nice story... waiting for the second part!

12:39 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey IcEyez: Engaging! Sounds autobiographical ;D

4:49 AM  
Blogger Yours Truly said...

Waiting for part 2. Post it soon :)
But enakku "piriyaadha varam veNdum" padam nyaabgam coming with interchanged roles :)

5:03 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@Rashmi,

Guess it is fictitious ;-)

@Yours Truly,

I didnt see tht film ! so not able to comment on tht dude :)

6:20 AM  
Blogger SamY said...

dei neeyum mega serial's maadhiri arambichuteeya #-o ... vaazhdhudhu poo

some how suuthi valaichu nee love story ku thaan vare. idhu seri illai

ha ha ammmam, rhyming nu sollitu T.Rajendhar rangeu'ku yedhanum yezhudhame irundha seri

8:04 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@samy,

Hey...nothin like the mega serial stuff da...hahaha...jus' scribblin' my imaginations ;-)

12:45 AM  
Blogger Anck su Namun said...

@iceyez
edho serial' lerndhu copy adcha madhiri irukku

@samy
India'la story'na adhu love story thaan. 'Terminator', 'Aliens' madhiriya story irukkum...

1:10 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@Anck su Namun,

seems ur watchin too many serials..;-)....heehee...this is not inspired by those ..:-D

3:08 AM  
Blogger Ramses said...

aaaaaaaaaah! ningalum ungal thodarum!!!!

sirkaram bring out the second part!!!

6:04 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@Ramses,

ya..almost done...with it..comin soon ;-)

8:08 PM  
Blogger Visithra said...

engeh thodar???

ure heading the way jade suggested right??

12:08 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

aahaaa ..vishi...jus takin it the way my mind tells me ;-)

1:18 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey eYz,

There is something missing. An introduction like "Barathiraja".

"En iniya tamil makkale ... "

6:54 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Hmmm...Waiting for part 2

12:12 AM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

@Digi,

Adpaveegala...enaku appram blogspotla sangu oodhiduvanga..;-)

@Curious,

howz u ?? ya..writing it..will post it soon :-)

10:28 PM  
Blogger cerisecarnations said...

hmmm ...whens the next part ??

7:16 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Hi Solitary Reaper,

Welcome back ! ya will post it soon :)

8:11 PM  
Blogger Blue Athena said...

Nice! :)

Go on buddy!

9:37 PM  
Blogger IcEyeZ said...

Thanx blue ! :)

11:34 PM  

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