neiGhBoURhOOd ! not bAD anymore...(part3)
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......Residents of the neighbourhood have slowly
started contemplating abt quitting the place !
Is there an Angel to Guard, or do they have to trust none but God...
Not even the slightest clue about whos who !
All they need to do, is to trace the Two !
They were getting more n more threats day by day...
not from anywhere but from within !...
....
Well...
Emie...Couldn't believe her eyes !
Her adonis lying on the Rug...
silently slaughtered by the thug ...
Lots of thoughts, tons of fear running in emie's mind...
when did she faint...
when did the lights turn on...
when did eric came ...on...
Did Roger Kill eric ?
As she gets up...There she finds Roger... with his cheeks grazing his revolver..!
Emie, with her eyes blinking fast as though this day is her last !
Roger, pretty cool, less worried, confirming emies thoughts, as if the entire plot was well conspired !
He was all the more enjoying the cool breeze ...
and as he made his aim to her forehead....!
he saw emie slowly tryin to grab somethin, the knife near the teapot...
or the tab tied to her wrist...or was there more to the locket hanging from her chain??!!
Half past eight...
The entire apartment was surrounded by scores of cops...
for the encounter on a stormy night !
all eyes aimed at emie's apartment ...
Again a mild agitation,followed by a shot from the gun...
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......
....
......
....
......
The cops getting all the more alert,
n there rings... the mobile of the chief...
It is a call from ROGER !
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....
......
Roger: " Mission Accomplished Sir ! both of them gunned down..."
The cops breath in peace, with a great sign of relief !
As Roger came down, he was greeted by one n all for his guts n gumption leading to glory !... The Angel from God, whoz to Guard all of em'...
Well this is all Roger had to say, "The Neighbourhood, not bad anymore !"...
THE END...
Adios !
......Residents of the neighbourhood have slowly
started contemplating abt quitting the place !
Is there an Angel to Guard, or do they have to trust none but God...
Not even the slightest clue about whos who !
All they need to do, is to trace the Two !
They were getting more n more threats day by day...
not from anywhere but from within !...
....
Well...
Emie...Couldn't believe her eyes !
Her adonis lying on the Rug...
silently slaughtered by the thug ...
Lots of thoughts, tons of fear running in emie's mind...
when did she faint...
when did the lights turn on...
when did eric came ...on...
Did Roger Kill eric ?
As she gets up...There she finds Roger... with his cheeks grazing his revolver..!
Emie, with her eyes blinking fast as though this day is her last !
Roger, pretty cool, less worried, confirming emies thoughts, as if the entire plot was well conspired !
He was all the more enjoying the cool breeze ...
and as he made his aim to her forehead....!
he saw emie slowly tryin to grab somethin, the knife near the teapot...
or the tab tied to her wrist...or was there more to the locket hanging from her chain??!!
Half past eight...
The entire apartment was surrounded by scores of cops...
for the encounter on a stormy night !
all eyes aimed at emie's apartment ...
Again a mild agitation,followed by a shot from the gun...
....
......
....
......
....
......
The cops getting all the more alert,
n there rings... the mobile of the chief...
It is a call from ROGER !
....
......
....
......
Roger: " Mission Accomplished Sir ! both of them gunned down..."
The cops breath in peace, with a great sign of relief !
As Roger came down, he was greeted by one n all for his guts n gumption leading to glory !... The Angel from God, whoz to Guard all of em'...
Well this is all Roger had to say, "The Neighbourhood, not bad anymore !"...
THE END...
Adios !
scribbled by IcEyeZ at 10:04 AM
19 Glances:
heyyyy, thatz a nice twist to the story
nice one dude, keep em commin
a bit of incoherence if I might add -
"Emie's parents have left her all alone in the apartment, to attend a weekend wedding."
"Emie had her math exam over the next week tht made her stay at home."
I just feel that conflicts bit with the story ... or maybe I missed something to accomodate that :-?
A student, can very well be a terrorist, well staying @home with her parents ! ;-)...
To me terrorism is a "State of Mind"...
wow dude..that was a nice finish..cool man..
well do write more!
hey dude,
Nice one daa .. I just read the entire 3 parts and man i really appreciate the imagination, the rhyme, the way its presnted and yes the twist....cool one sir....Keep it going !!
i jsut rummaged through some of you other posts and i came across the photo of the woman and child and the caption beneath it.
i recently had a student write an argumentative essay on the origins of the apple as the symbol of sin, or knowldege in the bible.
her argument was motherhood is why we were banished from the garden. it is that which makes us close to god. only god created life. until eve was with child.
Welcome jADe,
Thanks for the comments ! keep visitng dude :-)
lol what a twist wasnt expecting that! ;)
@Vishitra..
lol...so wat did u expect ? ;)
its was a grat jolt...didnt expect...
nice effort...keep them coming
Yo Sophie...thanks for the words dudette ! :-)
Didnt find u for long ? busya ?
Me thought roger n eric were 2 mosuitoes... thought that was going to be the twist
Mr Bard...
I Do agree u see even tragedies as comedies ! But this is too..oops...three much !...anywayz tht was a good idea...next time will try more of a twist ;-) Take care dude...
Mr.Iceyez,
ROFL....with what Bard said...hehehe ... LOL....
How is you today..what da became so busy ?
Yo jADe... Not really busy...thinking wat to write next ? !! ;)
Kool! Liked it much! :)
Hey Blue,
Thanks for passing by :-)
Hey What a twist.
Well done
Hi Rashmi !...
wat long time no see..?
Thanx buddy :-)
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